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TwinsPoster of unknown qualities WIP - 1

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This is still a WIP. But I still want to know hows its doing before finishing it.

I plan to add some more plants, some mushroom and some trees, some stones/runes/statues and some lamps. I was also thinking of adding some fog or mist in it...is that too much stuff?

so my questions are:

how does this make you feel?
is it cluttered? or confusing?
will adding the other stuff make it cluttered?

edit:
also if you see your texture and I haven't credited you yet, I'll add ALL the credits for texture on the official release! so you WILL be credited!

here's the most recent one:
TwinsPoster of unknown qualities WIP - 2 by NovaLupe
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For me, it feels cluttered. The reason for it is that everything basically has the same colour and texture, which makes it one overly colourful whole. I really like the sky and the sun; the hills, however, feel out of place.

Considering the main focus point of your piece is the sky, I'd suggest trying to expand it, and decrease the size of the hills. They detract from the moons and sun.

Hope it helps ^^